So we live in a world where they are all fakes
Where no body gives and every one takes
Every teenage girl wants to be like the models in the magazines
Not realizing that they are not as perfect as they seem
Life is our stage so ladies and gentlemen put your hands together for the next act
Never let your guard down, you better watch your back
With every one thinking that it’s cool to drink and get high
They all find it comical when they see tears fall from your eyes
Who’s going to save us when our heroes fall
Will we stand up and answer to that desperate call
When will we stop holding back because we are afraid of what the “in crowd” will say
Will we ever have the courage to do things in our own way
So I’m asking you are you willing to stand up for what you believe in
Are you willing to try to improve the world in which we live
Author notes
This all came to me. Tell me what you think plz...
Written June 21st, 2006
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Thanks for the wonderful comments on my poems. They were appreciated!
Isabel
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wow...this poem is so true!! i absolutly love it because people need to be themselves and stop pretending! this poem is amazing..you have true talent so keep on writing for sure!
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Full of much truth which is fantastically presented with much clarity and strength. the flow is very smooth and the rhymes natural and not at all forced
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I read it, happy?
You should know about using people Isabel. Anyways you wouldn't get the comment. Nice poem -
Lol thanks for the awesome comment Jess. Yeah I hope it's gone for a while too. Well thanks again, ttyl.lylas.
much love
Isabel
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O.O What a wonderful comeback! It's amazing! Pure brilliance ^.^ The thoughts that are on so many minds yet so many are afraid to say. It's written so well, and the flow is really good. The rhyme scheme is good, and you kept it on track and you really got your point across. Positively amazing ^.^ Keep up the great work, and I hope this means that that writer's block of yours is gone for a while at least
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Thanks for the awesome comment. Yeah, most people are just out to use you. Well thanks again for commenting!
isabel
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Great
I really like it. i agree with your poem. It's just how I feel about life because almost everyone will come up to you because they want something from you. anyway keep writing. -
Thanks hun for the comment! It was greatly appreciated
Isabel
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Beautiful poem
Hey! This was a beautiful poem. I loved it so much. It is so true, not many people really care about others and that's really sad. Great write and keep it up. Talk to you later.
Love, Cassie
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