home is drenched in anger and alcohol
driving her into a breakdown of tears every night
she attempts to drown them out with music, but she can still hear them between the broken lyrics
she locks herself away in her room with acid tears burning her face
they will never understand the broken soul behind those dark eyes
she's caged within the flames of this hell
everyday more of her is burned into pathetic ashes
she tries to find an escape from this twisted nightmare
but she gets pulled back in
her hopeless thoughts continue to make her ill
paging doctor failure, there is no cure
home is drenched in anger and alcohol
driving her into a break down of tears every night...
Author notes
ok this sux i know. i have been having trouble getting emotions into poem form. bare with me. but tell me what you think plz...
Written June 20th, 2006
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Another Goody!!
How can you say this sux when you can go a few doors down in any neighborhood and find this. You were more simple with this one but the point came across clearly. Another good piece well done. MyKeeeeeeeeeeeeee -
Wow.. good job, i really enjoy reading your poetry it is very well wrote. well done!- feel free to cheak out some of my poetry i am only new!
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This doesnt suck. It comes from the heart, and whatever comes from the heart never sucks.
'her hopeless thoughts continue to make her ill' i really loved that time because i can relate to it. Its horrible when you're thinking something that makes you feel bad. 'Driving her into a breakdown of tears everynight...' was such a beautiful line, another one i can relate to.
I really liked the whole poem i could feel how you felt. Some of the lines you used were soo beautiful.
Well done and i hope your okay
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