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Spirit of Christmas

Spirit of Christmas


The ghost of Christmases past
Left me a gift
On Christmas eve
As I slept.

It was a present meant to last,
Bound to uplift,
Help me believe,
And I wept.

I, an awestruck child
Who had nothing
Yet was standing
Beside an ancient king
Before the Christchild.

I received the same grace
As my lips formed the word....

Hallelujah!

I beheld the same face
As angel's voices I heard

Sing  Hallelujah!!

Whether or not I dreamed
Meant little to me,
For in that moment it seemed
That I could see
In that simple Nativity
The Star of all Eternity.

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Written December 6th, 2001

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  • PoetrySmiles
    December 5, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Wow, a beautiful write. Truly amazing.

    Meg

  • Bran
    October 9, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Sometimes we believe in something so strongly that it doesn't matter whether it's real or not. -Brandon

  • Lady Oblivion
    May 25, 2002
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    excellent

    beautiful. nice stanza breaks.


  • WaryDreamer
    December 7, 2001
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    This is truly a beautiful poem with a beautiful message...I have a different illusion of 'ghosts' now as compared to a few years ago... 'Ghosts' of Christmases past actually has some meaning for me. I think what I liked best was 'whether or not I dreamed...' that was good, m


  • Grundle
    December 6, 2001
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    A beautiful experience expressed so wonderfully. I like the emotion conveyed in this poem. Thanks


  • Carole Dudley
    December 6, 2001
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    Exquisite reflection of a moment of startling faith.

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