A spark in the shadows
Please don't die out,
Grow ever brighter
And shine,
Like I know you can.
Author notes
It's short i know and i may or may not edit it...either way i hope it gives u a little bit of inspiration steven 
Written June 21st, 2006
A contest entry
- Contest: Words of Love for Steven Morris by Miss Faerie.
300 points, ended August 15, 2006, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Short and sweet sometimes truly does the trick, as is the case here. You've shown the light in him beautifully
Shari
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Salma it was short but so meaningful. Your friend Steven is candle lighting the darkness around. It must be the most beautiful simile you can use (Although I know talented Salma can use even more beautiful ones!) And this candle won’t die out till he has such friends believe him.
Thanks for sharing this with us
~Massy~
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very nicely written
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that would be very inspiring to steven, whoever this lucky person may be.
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yay! Thank you sayya! Everyone's been so good and encouraging, I love it Steve
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Lovely!!! Steven will feel soooo good by the end of this contest chica! He's a great guy with some amazin friends
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Lucky Steven to have such a write dedicated to him. I think that your pieces are brilliant short. The way in which you work is just the way in which you work and simplicity is what you are best at. Thank you very much for your presence and I hope that you are very very well Sayyadina. All the best to you and thank you again. Tony.
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Awe this is beautiful No need for many words,when you write from the heart. Steven is such a treasure to so many.
Good Luck in the contest.
As Always,
Deena
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