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personal suicide

why am i tormented
day after day, i can't seem
to get away
there's no escaping this pain
it seems like there's
nothing to gain
forget this life,
i'm done.
i don't need you now.
you just add stress
this war can't be won,
i can't fight against
something that i'm certain
to lose.
maybe i'm better off
alone and scared
left to die
without anyone by my side
my personal suicide

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Written February 19th, 2006

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  • darkpoet6789
    June 27, 2006
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    awesome

    i love this! i dunno why but i like the end the best! i have felt like this for a long time.

  • dying-for-you
    June 21, 2006
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    good

    there's no escaping this pain
    it seems like there's
    nothing to gain *that is my favorite part!
    i felt lyk that for a very long time.