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Laugh Until You Choke

Pretty girl
so close to the edge
Ugly girl
in her Own mind
Frustrated and tried
Too weak Too speak
so she just Bites her tongue
And her mouth fills with blood
The whole time She's s m i l i n g
Her Pretty Girl S m i l e
Crying i n s i d e
Her ugly Girl mind
Pretty Girl
Stuck in Ugly Girl Skin
With fat girl confidence
Fighting an imaginary war
in her b ro k en mirror

lonely

She'll learn to imitate happiness
So the rest of the World
Can leave her alone
And go about
Their imitation happy lives

Author notes

I've been trying to fight every urge in my bones and just write a poem without looking back a editing it. So, here it is.
Written June 21st, 2006

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  • pozo
    June 21, 2006
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    Great piece which I liked a lot Keep writing, I liked the layout and interesting, although sad subject
    All the best
    Thanks for your comment
    Pozo


  • YoungCutta29
    June 21, 2006
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    Great

    Very nice!!!!! A+