I know you are out there somewhere
Why don’t you want to be seen
I’ve searched all the usual places
But no one knows anything
I thought you was so happy
Being my best friend
I cannot understand it
Was it that bad for you to resent
Ok dear Faith I make a promise
Not to sing when you are asleep
So come out from wherever your hiding
And eat your bowl of meat
Ah there you are my friend
I suppose you heard what I said
Now come here give me your paw
Lets shake on my whistling instead.
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Written June 21st, 2006
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This is a cute poem about a dog, and you have such a nice flow in your poem.
Smooshes,
Moonshine Pixie -
yay!!!!
Aww did your doggy run away? Thats sad! I love doggys although I have never ever had one! hehe! I am glad you find your doggy again! Yay! That must have made you happy! -
Thank you love...I enjoyed writing it too..my last dog died 5 years ago though, she was such a friend..I remember the tricks she used to get up to and the walks we had together
great comment..
Love and hugs..
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Barb
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terrific
I simply adore this poem Barb. I can imagine a child reading this and getting a deep feeling of love and understanding for their dog. This poem shows your ability to relate to children: which is, quite a challenge in writng in this genre. Hey! I kind of like it too. This also shows your fabulous diversity in your writng. [quite a talent] God Bless-- -
Aww how sweet I so miss having a dog.I have a killer cat though
He's vicious and refuses to conform 
Hope all is good with you Babs.
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perfect
Awww poor Faith... don't be bold Nanna and sing while your best friend is asleep
but it is naughty of Faith to run away too but I think you both deserve to be forgiven ! I make deals with Pal all the time by shaking his paw but he never keeps his end of the bargain I love this poem 
It made me smile to read and imagine it all thank you for making me smile today because my throat is very hurty and I couldn't go to school so I was stuck at home all day. Resting is no fun 
but reading this poem was lots of fun Yay and I really am sooo glad that Faith came out of hiding
Maybe you could try whistling a lullaby. My grandda used to do that to help me sleep and its much quieter than singing
♥
lots of love
ellie xoxoxox
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