"Bite the hand of Satan and make it bleed,
Let him know you're both made by the same divine hands,
Echoes of sin vibe within both of you.
Steams rolling down enchain his grotesque shapes,
Scars from inner battles brought you to knees.
Inside his smelling wounds the gates of Hell are opened wide.
Never you shall feel the
Grind and
Sorrow."
"Oh,
Father!
Did I not rejoiced in his repulsive spells?
In any form I've sinned with my eyes opened wide,
Veils of fire embraced my mortal heart and
I've always hidden behind
Night's faking curtains,to embrace my dark
Enemy,in secret."
"Hope,my son!Close then your eyes
And open your heart!
Rebirth now,without a doubt,
My arms await for the lost...Satan's body's filled
Out with sin...Neither you shall ever be one with him
Nor your body will ever taste the sacrifice in his name!
You were blessed with divine harmony!"
Author notes
Written June 21st, 2006
A contest entry
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300 points, ended July 19, 2006, 12 entries
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OMG this was awesome! it reaches my heart an should all others that we have forgiveness and that were only human. Satan was once the first angel an considered the most beautiful of all the angels until he turned away from the light. Maybe if he had turned back this world would have peace now.
Nicely
Accelerated
Interpretation of
Lyrically
Expanded
Depth
Its
Triumphant
WTG! Good luck in the contest -
Wow! This is impressive! You have composed an acrostic the flows and feels like a prayer. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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Acrostics are tough to get flowing. You carried this of with ease. Best of luck!
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I really liked this. Thanks for your entry.
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Nice work...you flow very well thruogh out this piece.Your word chioce is also nice. good job
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts
on Blessings of Divine Harmony,
some great word choice.
Thanks for sharing
Love and Light
FrozenTearz -
I'm deep related to this poem! Thank you very much! Your are so kind!
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nicely done
You have made some really good acrostics here. Each is a unique little world of its own. As a Christian, I love your
focus. Everything seems to work together, and I love this write!
hugs WolfHeart
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