In life friends always come and go
But with you our closeness just grows
And I don’t know why
And I don’t know what it is
But I never want to let you slip
And I don’t want to hold you too tight
Cause that just causes you fright
I really hate to hurt you
So don’t ponder over everything I say or do
As sometimes I love to chew
Your brain till it becomes goo
You are the only person who knows me
You are the only one who lets me be
I love you cause that’s the key
For being my friend till eternity
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Written June 21st, 2006
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thanks... and i have shown it to my friend...
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Nice poem, it's hard finding the right words to say to your best friend but i think you've done an awesome job, hope you have shown your friend this poem if you haven't then i think you should..
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thanks...
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nice write i liked it cheerz 4 commentin on ma stuff u write great
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thanks and i love the way you write!
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Thanks for all the comments on my poems, I really appreciate them!! And since you commented, I decided to comment back.
This poem is really great. It's a really sweet poem. I likes it a lot. The rhyming and emotion is awesome!
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thank u... i appreciate it!
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this is really sweet. your love shines thru.
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i hope you are able to show this to them because this is beautiful. i love how you rhymed some of the lines instead of all of them. Great job!!! keep it up!
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hey i completely agree with you... thank you and i will definately read your poem ! thanks again...
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love it! i know how that is. you should read my poem called My Friends. our friends essentially are the most important parts of our life at this time. because our family doesnt understand us and our friends are going through or have already gone through some of the things that we are experiencing. they also mean a lot to us because they're always there and they alwyas wanna laugh with us and be by us. they love us, and thats really have we want right now. well anyway its a great write. keep up the good work!
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well i have a LOT of friends but then again they arent special enough to write a poem for them.... thanks!!! n i hate hurting someone i love!
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thanks so much...
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Yes, cute ...
I love having friends like that ... I have very few. My best friend is now my lover.
I loved your lines about not wanting to hurt them ... probably cos I can relate to such a thing. -
you poem is really sweet. it's cute, great job.
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That was a wonderful poem. It's great to have a friend like that to write about isn't it? Keep up the excellent writing my friend.
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