You slit your wrists
and let em bleed.
Wanting more than
you really need.
Hoping the pain
will make it easier.
Wanting someone to
make it all better.
Lying awake at night
in your bed.
Sobbing so much it
hurts your head.
Depressive thoughts
fogging up your mind.
Losing all senses
of direction and time.
Fading away into
oblivion and darkness.
Lost in a maze of
pain and sadness.
Slowly you feel
yourself falling apart.
As you pick up the pieces
of your broken heart.
Author notes
Written June 21st, 2006
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sad but true(lol)
Dark, sad and weird... just the way I like it!!!
this is great keep writing!!!!
Fan-tas-tic!!!!!
bravo!!! bravo!!! bravo!!!
Miss lava gothic
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Dark and very sad piece of work.I like it though.You did a good job!
Keep Writing
Blessed Be
~MagicalMoon~
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Perfectly Written
I really liked the way this poem just was! If that makes any sense. it was an amazing write. Great Job! This was a perfect piece for this contest. It was an incredible write!
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well done this poem has great flow and I wouldn't change a thing
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wow!
a m a z i n g
the flow of this is so great, and the ending is amazing. it got me! well done
<3Laura
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