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Dear Mr. Bunny

Dear Mr. Bunny,

Will i see you on easter
Will I see you in April
mommy says your just a image
A picture to represent Easter
But I think your more
More than an image
More than just a represenative for Easter.

Mr. Bunny
We the children love you
For you give us candy and
Sweet sweet chocolates
Dear Mr. Bunny
I love you
Because Mr. Bunny
Your Funny!!

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Written June 21st, 2006

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  • Forms of Me
    June 26, 2006
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    This is definitely a cute poem. I like the way in which you structured it also. I really know children will enjoy this one because of the whimsey. I think from a child's perspective too..it is fun.

    Keep up the good work.
    LIZ


  • PetersMomma
    June 21, 2006
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    YAY! Easter Bunny!!!

    I love the Easter Bunny... When I was a kid, Easter was my favorite holiday. You know how you could take pictures with the Easter Bunny? I did every year. That was then. The Easter Bunny IS a symbol of love and child's fun. It kindof gives kids something to think about besides bad things, you know? Way to go. ~Kacie Marie~


  • June 21, 2006
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    This is a cute poem, you are showing how the Easter bunny is a symbol of love and fun for children, and how hard it is for children to believe that the Easter bunny is not an actual real thing, but more of a symbol. Well done. Be Peace, Tink