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Everything is Better

It's definitely much better,
When I can feel you wanting me.
It’s so much hotter,
When you get on top of me.

It's definitely much better,
When you hold me down.
And I get so hot,
When you pin me on the ground.

And it's just so much better,
When you grasp my body tight.
And it gets so hot,
When you do it all night.

And it's definitely much better,
When you kiss down my neck.
I get so turned on,
As I dig my fingers into your back.

And it's just so much better,
When your hands slide down my skin.
And it gets so hot,
When you gently put your fingers in.

Oh, it's so fantastic,
When your body is on mine.
And it gets so hot,
When we start to grind.

And it's so much better,
When you touch and tease me.
And it gets so hot,
When you begin to please me.

And it's definitely better,
When you slide inside me.
And it gets extremely hot,
As you start to satisfy me.

And it's just so much better,
When we are both very near.
I get so hot,
When you moan in my ear.

It’s so thrilling,
When we climax together.
It gets so hot,
And everything is better.

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Written June 21st, 2006

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  • Galaxy2
    June 20, 2008

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    Yes...
    I do want you
    and intend to get on top of you, honey!
    I'd hold you down
    as I get tremendously hot
    I'd pin you down on the ground
    I'd grasp your body tight, my love!
    You'd see then how hot it gets
    I'd do it for the whole night...for sure...
    I'd shower kisses on you
    slowly going down on your naked body
    You'd get really turned on when you dig your pretty fingers into my sexy back
    My hands would slide down your vibrant skin
    and your skin would get hot like hell
    when I gently put my groping fingers in you, cutie!
    You'd experience new pleasures
    wen my body explores you
    and becomes a part of your amazing body
    and I become yours
    And it would get lustfully hot when I start grinding
    You'd realize how enjoyable it is
    when I touch you
    and tease you...
    and you'd not find me miser in that activity...
    I guarantee I'd really please you, sweetie!
    You'd love it, honey! when I slide inside your sweet pleasure zone
    and you'd feel really hot, darling,
    when I satisfy you
    I'd get too close to you...
    skin to skin...
    even nearer...
    and I bet I'd feel you getting hotter
    as I moan sweetly in your ear...
    you name....
    with dirty but lutful words, honey!...
    You'd really enjoy all that
    It'd definitely be highly exciting
    when we climax together
    it'd get hotter and hotter...
    better and better...

    I hope we'd meet soon, won't we?

    Your really hot and great, honey!...
    all sex...
    all lust...
    Kissesss...
    hot and wet and erotic...
    all over you...

    Galaxy2


  • ckwriter69
    June 23, 2006
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    HOT

    Great poem LynnJones. This was so hot and steamy, my computer screen is still fogged up. Loved it, Keep writing this is hot. Thanks for sharing