Stuck inside
This thing called life
A miserable girl
Who can do nothing right
Voices talk
And fingers point
At the broken someone
They think they won
She’s been broken down
And abused
Lied to
And used
She forces a smile
Tries to hide the pain
Of all the scars
Left on her vein
A depressed no one
Cuts
To hide the pain
Leaving markings in her vein
Looks up at the sky
And starts to cry
I say I want to be wanted
But now I must die
Goes home that night
And end my life
With a blade to the wrist
Of a girl who wont be missed
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Written June 21st, 2006
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awww so sad!!! i would miss ya girly!!
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boy i wish i could write this damn good..i feel like i no u or something reading this...its really deep and i love it!!keep up the awesome work!!!~Natalie
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Yeah, there really isnt a connection but the people who know me can tell me diffrent that there is a connection.. ive been a cutter for 3 years and just want to die but i want to see what all is out there im unwanted and a mistake to the world
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the most i ever commented on good job
this is hella the way i want to write, man this hits the shot like wowi really do love this...but i have to say that i don't feel a connection,i mean i feel sad that the girl dies knowing that no one will miss her but it doesn't make me think about it all...everyone gets depressed...i have...so i know the feeling, but what about the people that don't knoew the feeling how would you get the picture in their heads...but it's hella good it's like a movie of some kind -
i used to feel that way.
great words and flow.
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