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dead

Alone I sit

Watching the blood on the floor

Mad at life

I can’t take it any more



You say im a mistake

So im hoping that this blade

Will take

My life



Deeper and deeper

As the blood starts to shed

In this world

To you im already dead



So whisper

Don’t make a sound

Lay back and close me eyes

And listen to the blade hit the ground

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Written June 21st, 2006

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  • XalwaysXforgottenX
    June 25, 2006
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    goo good... !!!#@!%$#& but so sad.. i wish things would be better for yo!!


  • XxTWLOHAxx
    June 21, 2006
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    awsome poem... i like it.... i feel like that sometimes aswell......

    love jenny