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prayer

Now I lay me

Down to sleep

heres my soul

its your to keep



If I wake up

Before I die

Stab my heart

And leave with out a cry



Before you go

Make sure im dead

Even if it takes

A bullet to the head

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Written June 21st, 2006

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  • July 8, 2006
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    Before you go

    Make sure im dead

    Even if it takes

    A bullet to the head

    I love this stanza u have a lot of talent

  • XalwaysXforgottenX
    June 25, 2006
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    i really liked the first verse and the last .. it reminds me of the prayer.. now i lay me down to sleep i pray the lord my soul to keep if i die before i wake i pray the lord my soul to take