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Rage

Pushed over the edge

My knuckles clutched into fists

All control expired.

Author notes

Although this is not a traditional haiku (since it does not focus on nature), it is a haiku in form. I like to be creative with haiku and step out of the box.
Written June 21st, 2006

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  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    November 21, 2006

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    i read this and i know exactly what you mean. i can relate so much its not even funny lol its just so much like me coz i had an experience recently where i can just see this piece relating to it well done for stepping out of the box too good job, keep up the great work.


  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    July 26, 2006
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    ha i can relate so much to that ive been an angry person recently..good job on this...keep it up

    chris x


  • spacewench
    June 24, 2006
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    Sounds more like a Senryu than a Haiku. A good read that I can relate to, especially after being at work.


  • lovelypoet
    June 21, 2006
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    I like this mostly because I can relate to it and it is easy to understand. I like it when poets step out of the box and bend the rules.
    well good luck
    xoxo
    sam

  • HecticRain
    June 21, 2006
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    Hmmm... I get what your saying in the poem.

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