Quiet Mist dusts the blackened waves
Wind plays song, Tree keeps time
Sun's brilliant light, Moon reflects bright
Flower bent in solemn prayer
Bird takes flight, dances with Air
River rolls on, joins with Dawn
Nature serene, one Heart’s dream
With one glance she dares to care
With her heart she lives to love
With each step she graces dance
With one key she unlocks song
Mystic Nature is her name
A love for One, she has no shame
Clipped wings keep her close to earth
But don’t underestimate her great worth
For dreams keep her in the blue skies
The girl with the stars in her eyes
Author notes
This was written for a friend of mine who is happiest when she is outside.
Written June 20th, 2006
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Thanks so much hooloolover. I'm so glad that you liked it.
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This is very nice, I really LOVE the first stanza, great job!
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So nice to know I'm added to your favorites Jess100. That in itself it always encouraging. Just mentioning applause is applause enough, thank you.
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Thanks shzoosy for the compliment on my poem. I'm glad you found it lovely.
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Thank you so much Allen0826 for taking time to read my poem. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.
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Thank you angstagansta for taking the time to check out my poem. I'm glad you found the imagery to your liking. Thanks again!
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Thank you Rose Raven. I'm glad you found the poem beautiful.
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What an amazing and wonderful compliment regarding my poem. Thank you so much Lord voldemort for taking the time to read it. It is much appreciated!
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title is so nice i had to enter to see what mystery lay inside. i sued up all appauds i dont have one. i will come back here and aplaud. adding to my favourites.
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this was so melodic i could almost hear the music to it...a lovely write.. peace and harmony....shzoosy
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Such wonderful imagery throughout this write.
Thank you for sharing this write.
Best of luck to you in the contest!
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the imagery in this is fantastic! i wish you great luck in the contest! i think that nature is such a beautiful thing. and you bring nature to lfe in this poem.
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That was beautiful. The words were so eloquently weaved together. Great Job!
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excellent
Exceptional imagery ,your chopice of words was amazing and the theme behind the poem was quite exotic , you really mersmerise the reader and take him/her to a soujorn in fantasy under the stars and clear blue sky on the wings of your imagination i especially liked the part
With one glance she dares to care
With her heart she lives to love
With each step she graces dance
With one key she unlocks song
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Thank you twistasista2006 for such a great compliment. It is always an achievement when you can capture other senses with just words. Thanks for the contest!
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Thanks so much penman for returning the favor and checking out my poem. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Oh, my but the images are sharp and clear in this poem. You capture the way to have your reader SEE and FEEL, and, yes, belong to the scens that are captured through your writing. Beautifully done!
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Excellent
I think you truly capture what it is like to love nature and the joy of being outdoors in tribute to your friend. Great job! Good luck in the contest.
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