I swore i saw the carriage fly
i saw it with my own two eyes
my eyes dont lie
and neither do i
I swore i saw the carriage fly
The horse's feet floated in midair over the cliff
I saw it with my own two eyes
I gasped for air as i saw the impossible happen
the horse's mane flowed in the breeze
I swore i saw the carriage fly
The horse looked like it had invisable wings
It walked on air
It didn't touch the ground
I do not lie
I swore i saw the carriage fly
that is why im here
in a hospital that provides theropy for the mind
they say it will cure my 'hallucinations'
i will never be cured
i know what i saw
but then again...its humanly impossible for a carriage to fly
its all in my mind
Author notes
in this piece. The person is having a battle with herself comparing what she saw to lodgic and facts. she concludes that she was having hallucinations and that she was really acting crazy.
Written June 20th, 2006
A contest entry
- Something Just For Fun by Huntress.
300 points, ended June 20, 2006, 5 entries
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lol,
This was really interesting to read...
'theropy' should be 'therapy', other than that, it was a really entertaining read but even made me think a bit... I don't have any idea whatit would be like to have hallucinations like that...
Annie
(you can call me that if you like^^)
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If i saw this i would think i was crazy too
Very cute poem Good luck in the contest
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Haha. I swear I saw it fly!!! Sounds like something I would do. I would be like IM NOT CRAZY!!! This is cool. I like a bunc
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