I swore i saw the carriage fly
i saw it with my own two eyes
my eyes dont lie
and neither do i
I swore i saw the carriage fly
The horse's feet floated in midair over the cliff
I saw it with my own two eyes
I gasped for air as i saw the impossible happen
the horse's mane flowed in the breeze
I swore i saw the carriage fly
The horse looked like it had invisable wings
It walked on air
It didn't touch the ground
I do not lie
I swore i saw the carriage fly
that is why im here
in a hospital that provides theropy for the mind
they say it will cure my 'hallucinations'
i will never be cured
i know what i saw
but then again...its humanly impossible for a carriage to fly
its all in my mind
Author notes
in this piece, the person is having a battle with herself after the events that took place in the picture. she wrestles what she saw with lodgic and facts. She concludes that it was all in her mind. At this point, I believe that it would be the first step to her cure.
Written June 20th, 2006
A contest entry
- Something Just For Fun by Huntress.
300 points, ended June 20, 2006, 5 entries
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Comments
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I really liked this one! It made me smile! Great job!
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I was going to write 'haha' but then I read the author's comments and decided not to. I love the way you wrote it because I really did believe that there was a flying carrige. But may I ask you why you placed this poem in Humour?
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I think i would be crazy too if i saw this flying
Very cute, good luck in the contest 
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