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A Road Filled With Sorrow

I'm walking down a road filled with pain,sorrow,and hate.
No matter how fast I run or how slow I walk,this pain I cannot bear.
People stop to talk to me,but I they do is stare.
Please someone take this pain away...it's more than I can bear.
I reach out for someone to talk to,but there's no one really there.

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Written June 20th, 2006

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  • XxXdArCyNiCoLeXxX
    June 21, 2006
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    Thanx for the comment....it ment alot!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 21, 2006
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    Well Expressed!

    This place you speak of that leads to nowhere..I feel I'm walking upon, but when the sun shines each day, I see sometimes that I was wrong..

    I hope you feel better, if this is a personal piece for you at all..I'm sorry you're so down, and feel isolated.

    I send my love dear friend,
    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver~