None of you are really there,
In my reality,
Smouldering inside,
You can't be worth my tears,
Not the burning sting of tearing waters,
That mean my heart has broken,
And that i've fallen by the wayside,
Bowing my head to the wind,
Except maybe,
I wanted to cry for you,
My last hope,
Where I have placed all my trust,
Making the world topheavy,
While my cargo is smoking and burning,
You'd wipe away my tears,
But I can't find any for you,
Because you've never hurt me on purpose,
Not scars that can be seen,
Just loving you hurts me,
And I know you've made me feel,
More than any blood filled terror,
More than any Star spangled glory,
More than any deluded despair,
And any warped imaginings,
You're the only one,
Who would ever be worth my tears,
But you'll never see them,
As they'll never be for you,
You're too perfect.
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No one is worth your tears & the only one who is will never make you cry
Written June 20th, 2006
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I like this. Especially the line:
You'd wipe away my tears,
But I can't find any for you,
Because you've never hurt me on purpose,
Not scars that can be seen,
Just loving you hurts me,
That's Sharp! -
beautiful
I really like this poem. It is very very deep. Also, it isn't completely straight foward; it is kinda abstract. Abstract poetry is the best! Anyways, I love it!
You're the only one,
Who would ever be worth my tears,
But you'll never see them,
As they'll never be for you,
You're too perfect.
That ending part is my favorite part to it. It is very well said and it is a very well written conclusion. -
This is a wonderfully written poem! Very beautiful! Thanks for entering!
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