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Lost

Lost in my own little dream world
Once you think someone likes you
It turns out that they don't.

Lost-lost-lost

In my own little world
Yeah i like a guy
But so what, im just lost
Lost in my own little dream world.

How that guy  likes another chick
Maybe a hore a slut or maybe a tramp
Is what i think she could be.
I don't think so.
Becaause i'm lost in my dreamland
Thinking he would pay more attention to me
Thinking that he would hold me close to him
Thinking that I was the only one he liked
Thinking I was the only that he cared about
That I should be the only one he cares about

Cause i'm lost
she's not any of those things
But A good friend
And i'm lost
Because
Because
it was all a dream.
I am no longer lost!!!

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Written June 20th, 2006

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  • June 21, 2006
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    Interesting, I can see that you have a kind heart and even when you want to be mad at someone you can't bring yourself to say negative things. ( hore is spelled Whore, by the way ) Someday your Prince Charming will gallop in and when he does you might run away, LOL Be Peace, Tink

  • Cute-in-pink
    June 20, 2006
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    Good

    I loke you poem it good i really i love it Googd Good!!!! well keep up the good work!!!