Was there a life before you
Did my heart ever stir
Before it held the love of you within
Did the colours of the summer sky
Look so jewel-like in my eyes
Before you held out your hand to me
Was I happy before you
Did your touch ignite the fire in my soul
Or was it smouldering within
Awaiting your love to relight it
Did the mundane tasks of my life
Ever seem like pleasures before
As my gestures bring a smile to your lips
I was lost
And then you found me
Your love a beacon in the darkness
Beckoning me to your ever loving arms
I love you
You complete me
Now I finally feel alive
Basking forever
In the glow of your unconditional love.
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I love you John 
Written June 20th, 2006
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awww. I always feel so happy for you when you start talking about him, like I've always said, you deserve it. Love the poem and am so glad to be back. Missed you!!!
Adriana -
wooooooowwwww. This is lovely!
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This is beautifully written and expressed. You make me remember what it feels like to be in love (even though it was a very, very, very long time ago!). Anyway, I hope you feel this way forever. So is your muse back on stories too?
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beautiful
what a beautiful write sis i really loved it. you have an amazing way with words. i wish i could write as good as you. you have so much talent. i am so glad things are going good for you and that you have finally found your one true love. miss u like crazy...sending you all my love -
aww this is so sweet and so true i know the feeling i sometimes wonder if ill ever find anybody else quite like him but anyways this is a really amazing peice keep it up.
-Chloe- -
Oh wow man this was sweet; some of these poems can be pure way too lovey dovey type stuff, but this seemed really genuine, and its the kind of poem that gives people an uplifted heart when reading it - nice job
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Aww, this is beautiful. I know exactly how you feel too!! I can't believe you don't have more comments for this, it's absolutely amazing!! I love the picture of emotions you painted.
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