Darkness has invaded my dreams
And raped my soul
My heart feeling so heavy and yet so empty
Afraid of those voices
Death is laughing at me
Whispering to me, he is mine
Crying in the cold rain
Reaching out to hold him
To find that he is gone
Stolen like a rare diamond
Never to be with him
Never to have him in my arms
Lost in the darkness
Never to return
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Lost in darkness
Written June 19th, 2006
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This is such a beautiful poem and one so full of emotion and sadness. I could feel the pain while reading through this. Well done, and I hope that you feel better.
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It strange how lost love can stir up so much emotion and pain. And for something so fragile and rare as love to do so... is simply insane. But... we are social creatures afterall. If only our hearts were unbreakable...
~Pedro~
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you are never lost sister mine, you just can't see where you are going yet. hang in there and things will get better i have all the faith in you. beautiful wods from a beautiful lady
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Wow what a deeply moving piece of writing from one so beautiful. Hope you are ok. Thinking of you xx
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Tragically beautiful
Oh, honey....
I know exactly how you feel... I'm there with you, holding your hand, crawling to whatever flicker of hope there's left... and watching it extinguish. Ahhh, Misery... she is a horrid lover... but you see... she inspires the most heart-wrenching and beautiful poems... Just like this one. 
I really hope you get out of this rut soon, Rosa... As difficult as it is... don't surrender to Death's kiss... Too many will miss you. 
Una rosa para mi Rosa. So glad to see you still writing, honey. I thought you had completely forgotten about lovely lil' AP... 
Sending you bunches of lvoe and hugs and kisses, sweetie. We all need those sometimes. Hope to talk with you soon... and I'm sorry for vanishing off the face of the earth for so long... there has been so much going on... that I'm not particularly ready for. Hence... I reside with you in your hell of darkness and anguish. May your suffering diminish soon... All my love, dear.
Always,
~Stephy. -
Beautifully sad
Beautiful Rosa, but, oohh soo sad my sweet, it's great to see a post from you, it makes your Tia very happy.
Love Tia
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I love the way you write
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great write, beautiful and dark, very elegant and haunting, some good descriptions in here, an original piece, well done. amy
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Beautiful.
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