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Her True Lover

She pulls back,
As she knows she must,
This can't go on,
It's just too much.

She's making it stop,
And causing him pain,
Not hoping to gain a thing.

She's not ready,
It's not the right time.
She wants to wait.

She's waiting for love,
Not lust.

She doesn't feel for him,
The way she feels for another,
She's stopping herself,
Before she betrays her true lover.





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Written June 19th, 2006

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  • infamous sorrows
    August 15, 2006
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    =]

    thanks sooo much =]

  • AngelofArt
    August 14, 2006
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    Wow. I mean that, that was my reaction to this poem. I like it. Muchly.

  • Unquenchable
    August 13, 2006
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    Here is the promised applause...Thank you for yours. It's not often people like what I have to say enough to reply! I meant it though, I loved this.


  • infamous sorrows
    August 13, 2006
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    i would love that!!! i applauded your cmnt =]

  • Unquenchable
    August 12, 2006
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    Of all characteristics that we are given to maintain our humanity...I think the call to be true to ourselves may hold some of the most obligation. When you're not right with your heart, your morals, yourself...it eats away you. And if you aren't honest with yourself, you lose that essential part of being truly human.
    This was a beautiful write. I loved it. I will have to applaud it tomorrow if you don't mind, cuz I've used mine up for today!! Thank you for your comments on my work.
    Sam

  • infamous sorrows
    June 19, 2006
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    thanks. i'm a girl, and it's not so much of being in the wrong of a person, as it is of being in the wrong of the girl's own heart. I believe that as long as a person is betraying his or herself, they can never be true to anyone else, that's basically what this poem is about.

    ♥ imfamous sorrows

  • infamous sorrows
    June 19, 2006
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    thanks, i actually started to write this one as the ending of another poem, but it didnt flow right, so i took this part out and made it a poem all by itself, i'm glad you like it. =]

    god bless.

    ♥ FEE


  • LiLblueButterfly
    June 19, 2006
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    be true my love

    I love it... It says alot about you being true and knowing when you are in the wrong..
    Brittaney


  • forgotten remedy
    June 19, 2006
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    oh wow! this is simply beautiful!!!! i love how it just flowed together!!! simply amazing and very delightful to read...but some what tragic. wow keep it up
    ~mandy~

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