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Dear God

Dear God,
   Please save me from this cruel place you call Earth.
Do you not see my pain?
Do you not here my cries?
Or are you just bussy helping to solve someone elses problems? But all i'm asking is for you to hear this prair and save me.
Please God all i'm asking for to help me, just give me an answer to solve my problems.
Thats all i'm asking.
So please God, Wont you help me?

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Written June 19th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Decorus Somnium
    June 20, 2006
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    Oh...well I hope it's nothing personal very sad yet very good one.God will help you hun don't worry!Good luck in the contest!
    Keep Writing
    Blessed Be
    ~MagicalMoon~


  • raggyann
    June 19, 2006
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    your asking the right person
    good p[oem
    and praise to god
    good work