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Dangerously Hidden.



She has the gift
of openness
a gift so rich and
rare

Her twinkling eyes
can bring a smile
if it's just lurking
there

A hand held out
to take the pain
when others
do not care

This one so true
is there for all
if we but only
dare...

The words we write
express it all
in dribs and drabs
maybe

But out it comes
in shape and form
and also ...
harmony

A muse is small
but nurtured well
she'll calm the pain
with ease

She sometimes hides
within the soul
and sometimes she
will tease.....





 

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Written June 19th, 2006

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  • cutiepie gold member
    June 22, 2006
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    It probably manifests it's self as either or....lol but I like to think of a muse as female as it helps me express myself in gentle mode rather that fighting mode Glad you enjoyed this, many thanks for your kindness


  • cutiepie gold member
    June 22, 2006
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    Ah yes, my pen flows in intermitten bursts Glad you enjoyed this, many thanks for your comments

  • cutiepie gold member
    June 22, 2006
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    Thank you Glad you enjoyed it, many thanks for your kind comments

  • luvdrkchocolate
    June 21, 2006
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    This is very cute! I like the expression you were using in this! I have seen other poems about muses and I think they're very interesting. I always wonder though, why a muse is always thought of as a female? What if it's a really a male! Then we could be hurting his feelings! I don't know. I was just having a bit of fun, musing with your poem! lol I think it was very cute and lyrical. Kind of flowed along on it's own way. So you did a good job in expressing yourself. So thanks for featuring this so that we all had a chance to share your words and feelings with you!


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    June 21, 2006
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    This is so very beautifully written, it has amazing flow and the form is lively, very energentic piece filled with wisdom, great write from start to finish. Keep your pen forever flowing! Bunny


  • StarEyes
    June 21, 2006
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    I had to read twice, cause i was reading some of the comments, and got lost for a minute. this piece flows so nicely and is so simple that it has an elegance all its own. thanks for sharing.

  • cutiepie gold member
    June 21, 2006
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    You are most welcome Delighted that you enjoyed it

  • cutiepie gold member
    June 21, 2006
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    Glad you enjoyed it Many thanks for your kindness

  • cutiepie gold member
    June 21, 2006
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    Thanks Xavier for the kind words


  • TJCasser
    June 21, 2006
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    *chuckles* Very cute indeed. Enjoyed this one greatly - it was a nice surprise to discover. Thank you for sharing it.


  • Celticmoon
    June 20, 2006
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    I must admit I am amazed at the perfect flow of this piece. It was like riding upon a breeze while reading. It just kind of sweeps you right along with each stanza. A lovely and refreshing read I must say. The beauty and elegannce of this is just wonderful. Nicely Done!


  • Azyatar
    June 20, 2006
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    WOW

    wow, i love it...it flows so well, and the words are so beautiful, the image of my loved one came to mind so strongly while i read this...im glad i got the chance to read this, ur wonderful, and so is your work..keep writing, and ill keep reading. thanks for infusing something light into a world that can sometimes seem so black...

    Sincerely
    Xavier

  • cutiepie gold member
    June 20, 2006
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    Thank you ...glad you enjoyed it

  • Ir.muse
    June 20, 2006
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    A cute piece dear cutie.
    Wish you the best.

    Shahrzad


  • cutiepie gold member
    June 20, 2006
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    Lol, yes...we all have our moments my friend Actually the wind is blowing very well today and with it comes a chill to bite the hardiest bones ...so much for summer


  • wattle silver member
    June 19, 2006
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    Ms Cutie, what a joy to read a bouncy happy piece. Abviously the the wind blows less cold today (great stuff) - thank you.


  • cutiepie gold member
    June 19, 2006
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    Mmmm...yes sometimes I get the urge to write something almost trivial to releave some of the stress that occurs when reading heavy poetry...rather like a release valve Thanks for your kindness, it is appreciated

  • cutiepie gold member
    June 19, 2006
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    Thank you...glad you enjoyed it


  • Walking Tall
    June 19, 2006
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    hehe woot.
    nice nice nice
    it makes a nice change from the suicide stuff i bin reading here l8ly.
    CJ


  • smileywiley22
    June 19, 2006
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    great job.
    its really nice.

    the lines;
    "A hand held out
    to take the pain
    when others
    do not care"
    remind me of family, of friends, and of love.
    well...the One i love rather.
    but its a really nice poem.
    keep it up.
    and
    great job
    -Meleah

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