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I stand

i stand on the side and watch
my world pass me by
yet having courage to fight
i cannot enter in
so i stand on the side and watch

i stand on the side and watch
everything i knew fall apart
yet having courage to attack
i cannot enter in
so i stand on the side and watch

i see my friends grow
young children mature
yet seeing as i've not change
i cannot enter in
so i stand on the side and watch

i wish i could talk to you
like i used to
i wish everything was different
yet knowing me
i'd probably forget
and maybe i have

if the past should be my future
it wouldn't have been in the past
if you were my tomorrow
why were you my yesterday

even though, my heart is cold
and my soul is drenched in dark
i will always be attached to you
but i won't ever feel again

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Written June 19th, 2006

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  • GC for KH
    June 19, 2006
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    Very awesome i really like it i really like the stanza thing "if the past should be my future
    it wouldn't have been in the past
    if you were my tomorrow
    why were you my yesterday"


  • smileywiley22
    June 19, 2006
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    very good.
    i like it a lot.
    it gives the reader something to think on.
    keep it up
    -Meleah


  • Hellalikeyeah
    June 19, 2006
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    i love how u tell a story...good job

  • creating new times
    June 19, 2006
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    how true is this. no words to describe. love it.