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Following Our Death

I can't say that she was
particularly engaging...
Foreshadowed was our descent.

This world filled with
illusions and delusionals,
our lives in particular.

Loose was our focus on
the road ahead...
Foreshadowing our descent.

This world was filled with
fruits and berries,
ourselves in particular.

I can't say that she was
particularly engaging,
For following our deaths...
we just faded away.

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Written June 19th, 2006

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