My Lady tied the silk scarves loosely
around my wrists,
the material so cool
and black against my satin skin,
now curled in half-knots and twists.
I watched with sultry eyes
(dark-passioned as night)
as She pulled her wanton tool
...tight,
.......tighter;
ensnared
I could not take flight.
She secured each scarf across the table
with sheer adroitness,
as my heavy breasts pressed (cold)
against it's surface
and my eyes turned dark as sable.
Old wood grains brushed,
coarse on their softness
(sheer bliss)
....arousing,
.........teasing
each firm rose-nipple
(unrushed)
as, beneath Her kiss,
an excited electric ripple
traversed
the length of my spine.
(I could sense Her thirst).
I felt the warmth emanating from Her,
as manicured nails
raked up the backs of my thighs
(I tugged on those silk ties)
and She spread my legs wide,
...........wider,
with a firmness that belied
the passion
now soon to be released.
I was to be
Her feast.
I could not still my heartbeats as they clamoured
wildly within my chest
(I was enamoured)
and I knew She would take me,
towards 'that' crest,
that peak
of desire
(we all seek)
where there is no rest
and we are taken again...
and again...
and again.
Who could refrain?
I felt Her fingertips
tug at the buckle of my belt
(so very svelte)
and with gentle lips
(oh, so sweet)
now resting on my cheek,
She deftly freed me from it's confines;
tugging hard
on my jeans and panties,
(with little regard)
as they fell past my slow-swaying hips
in loose folds around my feet.
Her hips now pressed hard against my nakedness
and I caught my breath sharply
(suddenly breathless)
when I felt Her silky smoothness
pushing onto me
and the coolness
of Chablis
now trickled
seductively down my back
(in rivers).
She licked the track
of each shimmering droplet,
causing shivers
that tickled
and aroused me,
as our silhouette
danced its mesmeric spree.
Moistness escaped the warm crevice
between my thighs
and slid lower
(slowly)
as She replaced her chalice,
with a light 'chink,'
upon the table
and continued to drink
(from me).
I could not disguise
my surprise
when She hurriedly stood
(with palms pressed flat on old table wood)
and felt a firmness now pushing,
...invading,
......pervading,
my sexuality.
With the heady scent of leather
I realised
(in my reality)
why She had sought
to tether
me.
She rode me hard;
Her painted nails digging in
to my smooth satin skin,
as silver studs glinted
on the black leather strap
pulled tight across Her waist
(I was not chaste).
The snap,
......slap,
of Her thighs
(on mine)
mingled with pleasured cries
and sighs,
as the table grated
and now warm wine
spilled
across grey slated
tiles.
I felt the tightening in my ass,
....burning,
.......yearning,
as with each pass,
She took me harder
(with Her ardor)
and forcefully
(following my entreaty)
pumped deeply into me.
She hooked Her arms around my waist
and those same svelte fingers
reached down
to find my pulsing bud
(my juices began to flood).
She rubbed seductively with one thumb,
then with fist-curled
She spun
my world,
as She plundered my velvet cavern
and,
with a flick,
.......a turn,
I was overcome.
( Friction burn ).
She sought to overwhelm.
Succeeding
(through my pleading)
in leading
me
to her realm
of sexual desire
and my fantasies lyre.
She took me erotically,
again,
and again...
and again...
into Her domain;
until passions fullfilled
our juices spilled;
(our lovers milk)
like
satin
and
......silk.
Author notes
Written June 19th, 2006
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if I were not gay, I would be today!
this was awesome and I have never experienced anything
this erotic. Whewww it is time for some ice to cool off.
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Magnificent piece of prose you have penned here. At first the length was intimidating but once i started reading, stopping was not an option. You have done an excellent job of taking this man behind the scenes for a look at true passion between two individuals.
Thank you for the journey and a longing to try this with my own someone special.
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well first off im not a lesbian but this made even me hot so that right there is saying something
i deffinetly want to read more of your erotica poems so keep it up wow
-brooklynn
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You have managed to light the world on fire
Peace,
Tom B.
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...i don't know what to say...this is so passionatly written. every word was seduction i felt as if i could see and feel it all.
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Wow....You tasty girl...watching with sultry eyes...dark-passioned...with heavy breasts...all blissful...with your beautiful length of spine...tugging on silkenties...out of pleasure...with spread legs...a potential feast...your heartbeats clamouring wildly within your pretty chest...with your peak ofdesire all exposed...getting pleasure of fingers tugging at the buckle ofyour belt...your jeans and panties being removed...as they fall past your slow-swaying sexy hips...in loose folds around your awesome feet....catching your breath sharply...getting breathless...while feeling the silky smoothness...being aroused...moist escaping the warm crevice...between your voluptuous thighs....your sexuality being invaded and pervaded...your delicious nectar being licked and drunk....your pulsing bud being rubbed and your juices beginning to flood...your amazingly pretty velvet cavern beingplundered...and you being overcome...
Oh my!...you're so wicked...so deliciously wicked...and I can't stand that...I really can't...can we have a threesome (joking...seriously)
One of the few best lesbian eroticas that I have ever read! You're great,honey,...really great!
Kisses!
Galaxy2
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Wow-o. This is so...
It's the best poem I've ever read. Period. Damn..If I were a guy I'd be hard..wow.
You did wonderful. I love how it kinda rhymes and kinda doesn't like it's part free verse. This is truely amazing.
I love this poem..omgsh..
Great great write,
PLEASE keep it up!!
-iao
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WHEW!
Whew ,Whew! That was good stuff! Excellent piece!
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sinfully delightful
Holy Moly Jesus! Sorry, I had to get that out first...
Wow. I am almost positive this is the most amazing erotic poem that I have ever read. Sinfully delightful... it takes the reader to the middle of the passion. Lesbian, straight, bi, gay... it doesn't matter who you are, you end up being a woman having a beautiful moment with another woman, which is the most absolute form of ART.
I'm sorry to ramble...but DAMN! The 8th stanza was my favorite... just the rhythm and movement of your words almost sends me into a blood pumping orgasm myself. I don't think that's ever happened before..
I also really enjoyed the use of parentheses. Awesome poem all around!
~d
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WoW!This is beautiful.
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yes am in lesbain and i love the poem
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Uhmmmm
clears throat...
While I am not lesbian but straight, this was very erotic in a sensual and tactful way. I will admit that I have always been curious about a woman/woman thing and perhaps if the situation presented itself in the right way, I would do it just for the sheer experience of it. Anyway without getting way off course in this comment, this is absolutely one of the best erotic poems I have ever read, sincerely
Best of luck in all you do
Becky
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Exotically Enticing
Oh my! Words have simply left me as I lie here spent from so much excstasy ...although I am not usually at a loss for words all I can say here is wow what a fantasy!
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Bravo
What an introduction to your writing! Not only have you created wonderful images in my mind you have placed ideas there as well. I am off to see my lady, now which drawer does she keep her scarfs in...
Eyec
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Mel, I havent been to Mels for ages and havent read any of your writing for quite a while... and now I am wondering why that is. You never cease to amaze me. You write so erotically -tasteful and passionate. I love the flow of this, the build up, the climax. Lovely my dear. Simply perfect
Jilli -
Oh Mel! This was gorgeous! I'm headed to the audio
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something to strech the imagineation
I am a big fan of erotica whether it be on film or written. i thought it was very well written, even though i am a 67 year old man who has been married for 44 years.
i thought that it was tastefully done. -
You can listen to the audio I recorded here : www.melswebs.com/satinandsilk.mp3
I will reply to each of you and comment on one piece of each of your works as soon as I can...
I hope you all enojy the audio
Mel x
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Wow man, that was real beautiful, I never read erotica i guess I'm ashamed at the fact that it turns me on. And I'm also ashamed that I only went to it because it had something to do with lesbians, (I am such an ASS.) But I guess it all worked out, because you've got such a beautiful rythem and flow to you. Your writing is fantastic, turns me fanatic, I can almost smell you two....Jeeze, my face is read, who ever thought a twenty one year old would shy out about reading about a lkesbian sex encounter, But damn. I really want to say you are a fant\astic writer and you amaze the hell out of me.....
Yeah, I know a very generic comment but hey I can't really help it, I'm kind of in awe at the art language you used.....Like the rhymes you used about her standing against the table, Or the lines surrounding the gray tiles line
Jesus, beautifully, masterfully, wonderfully done. -
you like woman. but what is wrong with a big man to satisfy your desire
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wow, that was great! vary hott lol good work
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Sexy Explosion
Beautifully done Melons. A very sexy erotic write. This was very detailed and full of lust and passion. You have done a great job of showing the strong emotions that flow from lesbian lovers. You wrote this so I felt I was in a corner watching every stroke and lick. Thank you for sharing this one. -
Mair
you want me to STOP!!! *chuckling. Thanks for coming to read.
hugs,
Mel x -
Very nice. You did this poem just wityh satin and silk. It sounds like you had fun. It was hot and sensual with an added servung of love. Keep writing.
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Love it!!!!!!!
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this is a good erotic piece of poetry - sensual and passionate.
spill poetic ink and twist me into the wild crazy shape of love...
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this is sultry and sensuality at its finest from a lesbian's point of view. And being bi myself, i could really picture this going on inside my head. Keep penning
Rae -
I'm asking you on a date. If you could make me feel on a date like you made me feel with that poem, then the fun would never end. great job and keep in touch....Gitaryzt
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this is a very good and sexual write i like it alot your a very poetic mind
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This is a GREAT poem..I have lived this story and it is as wonderful as you made it sound. Great job!
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You make your desire and joy in being dominated the center stone of this poem. It is a passionate paen to the elation and passion that can be expressed by the person being controled. You have done a wonderful job in expressing this. I imagine that in your dreams you are mastered by someone and held to the heights of you joyous cuming by their ravenging desires. Love, Tom B.
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hott
wow, this was a very, very good write. i mean simply amazing. you put so much detail into it and i absolutely love detail. this really got me wet. yes i know, i'm being a little too honest but i thinki might have to clean up my chair. i'm not a lesbian but i definetly get off on this kind of stuff. you did a very good job. you should get published if you haven't already. i'm looking into it myself. poetry.com does it but i'm not sure of the price yet. i'm gonna find out though. well anyways, sorry got a little sidetracked. this poem is like the erotic fantasies i have while i masterbate, i know, sorry a little much information but seriously, this is really quite good. keep up the awesome work. -
Goddamn.....that left me almost speechless. That was too hot to handle. Nothing like a good erotic poem to get me going, he, he. I love it. The full monty and it left nothing out.
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You have skillfully crafted a delight with your keen use of metaphors and imagery...It is very difficult to write an erotic poem and have the affect of a story and yet you have easily done so in these lines...Your skillfull use of the capital "S" and "H" in place of "Mistress" was a nice touch to the story line and the proper way to write a d/s piece...Very well done!
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NOTHING LIKE THE EROTIC LOVE IF TWO LESBIAN L
Wit h a name like MELONS I just knew that this had to be a HOT, HOT, HOT one that didn't fail to make harder ande bigger than your lovers strap-on! What a juicy and sensual read (with a trace of sweetness, too) on a humid, hot, and hazy Monday evening! THNAKS for spending your hard earned AP DOLLARS to feature this fine piece for otherwise I would have sadly missed it! It sounds like you and your lover have GOOD LOVIN, Melons!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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good job on the erotic poem.
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Wow...very arousing and sensual. I loved it, thankyou so much for sharing. A truely amazing poem. Keep writing!!
~marie lee
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wow! great write. that's so hot. my god. *pants a little* i'm not lesbian but that made me HORNY!!! OMG! GREAT!!!
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HOT
oooohhhhh, this was sweet!!!
loved it!may have to read more !
many blessings-
Krystal
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oh wow thats really hot i loved the way you portrayed it lesbians are best
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Wow! A very sensuous and erotic write, Satin and Silk.
Great work between the two of you!
Thanks for sharing this!
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Wow that was very intense you should qrite more like that. Job well done.
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DAMN! SHIT FUCK DAMN! sorry for the explatives but I have nothing more to say. You got power, you really have power, very stimulating. Keep up the writes.
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Beautiful
Wow I am sweating and um yeah!! Great write. Incredible visuals created. VERY stimulating write. Well done. Beautiful and so very erotic. Thank you for sharing. Jeannie D Hunter
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WHOA!
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