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-A Single "Rose"-

My admirer gave me a rose
It was just a "SINGLE ROSE"

That never died, or faded.
Ten years pass
I'm 25 now (And it's still here)

The rose is real
Not fake, or plastic
Suddenly the Rose dies
The next mourning my door bell rings
It's my admirer  "With a rose"
"A Single Rose"

(To Be Continued)

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Written June 19th, 2006

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  • I will stand by you
    February 27, 2007
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    lovely


  • June 19, 2006
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    Hmm... Well I read this one already, but you must of re posted it. Its a beautiful poem, but it would be creepy if the day after your rose died the admirer showed up with another one and boy... 2 roses in 10 years.. that admirer is sure working slowly! It's very well done though, can't wait to see the continuation. Be Peace, Tink