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Tearing Us Apart

I don't know why
But I feel us falling apart
I still feel as though
I'm getting you pulled into something
Something where you'll fall into
The hole I've dug myself a year ago
When I decided to give up on love.
I'm tearing myself apart
To stay here with you
I'm tearing US apart
By holding on so tight.
I don't wish to hold on
But I can't help it.
I know it's our only chance left for love
To hold onto what we have.
I'd follow you to the ends of the world
And I know you'd do the same for me
As much as I wish I could let go
I cannot.
I just hope I'm not really
Tearing us apart

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Written June 19th, 2006

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  • rosebud86
    July 24, 2006
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    i sorry that i have not talked to you lately i have not had a chance to get to a computer, but i think your stuff is truely .....truely wicked. love ya (sis)ha..ha


  • morgana raven Greeters member
    July 19, 2006
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    i completly understand this, boo lol bet u didnt expect me to comment, lol i saw u online realised i hadnt commented in a loong time so im glad that i have brill poem as usual
    laura xx


  • She Hides Her Pain silver member
    July 3, 2006
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    emily,

    Il ove this poem it is a great poem I can so realte to this poem. I have been in a realationship like that.He still loves me but he wants to be friends

  • Crying Soul
    June 20, 2006
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    I can sooooo relate to this poem.I had a relationship like this.I was trying so hard to keep it together for the both of us,instead I just made things worst thinking that they could be better. So then I just told him to let me go.After all the hard work.I tried and tried to make things right.Thinking that things could get better,that there was a still a chance for him to chenge.They just didnt.Then after all that all of a sudden he pops back saying that he misses me.I told him is was too late.I'm still trying to be his friend and all.He feels like hes the VICTIM.When he really isnt.He'll get over it.Anywho great poem! Thanks for sharing! s bye!