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Mirrored Emotions



A love connection
in his eyes, a lover's reflection.

That’s what it’s all about,
she’s in love, without a doubt.

Hands and eyes… interlocked
how much he loves her, she would be shocked.

Her sensuous fragrance
has him… in a trance.

Not trying to escape,
bed covers all out of shape.

Nibbling on her lower lip,
into heaven, taking a trip.

Upon her neck, a soft kiss,
if he were to miss a spot, he would be remiss.

A caress upon her shoulder, now bare,
whispering “I love you,” does he dare?

Lips upon peaks of pleasure,
overflowing affection, too difficult to measure.

A sweet nibble upon her ear,
upon her face, tears do appear.

Overwhelmed with emotion
visualizing pure devotion.

Relaxed… in the air,
kissing her everywhere.

Moist lips cascade,
whispering a serenade.

In a tight spot,
stealing her heart, he got caught.

A love connection,
in his eyes, a lover's reflection ~


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Written August 31st, 2005

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  • poet2angels gold member
    June 19, 2006
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    I remember this, and love it now as much as then. Your beautiful words really toouch hearts, Tim
    Lynda

  • FindingFate
    June 19, 2006
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    Very lovely, romantic write Tim. I see why Lynda loves doing collabs with you. I loved the title as well. Thanks for sharing, Trina


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    June 19, 2006
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    I love the sweetness and sensuality of this poem. Some people can just inspire us to write with every emotion coming out of our pores. Thanks for sharing.


  • looneyeclipse
    June 19, 2006
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    awwwwww thanks Sandra. I wrote that one and had it posted on the other site until I deleted everything and left, so I decided to post it again


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 19, 2006
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    Soo very sweetly, sensually, and beautifully written, my friend! Your heart shines like a beacon in the night, my friend! Thank you for always sharing you
    Hugs,
    Sandy

  • looneyeclipse
    June 19, 2006
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    Thanks tawk for the sweet comment. I wrote the poem a while ago, and it's one of my favorites, so I decided to post it
    Edited on Jun 19, 7:39 because 'I want to lol'.


  • tawk gold member
    June 19, 2006
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    excellent poem

    Wow what an exciting and emotional filled poem. I really loved it, so full of romance and love!

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