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You can't hide the wind
whispering through petunias.
When that fresh breeze
blows through your life...
Your glimmering heart
will tell on you.
Like sunlight blowing kisses
off the surface of the lake...
Everyone will see...
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Written June 18th, 2006
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Ah, Dear Presence, You touch us again with your soothing insight into love and life.
Yes, Proof of a life time well spent is self evident. Only within ourselves can we understand whether we are fulfilled or not. Beautifully written.
Love Tara
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The devine happiness of a peaceful loving heart is always self evident. Like you so eloquently write,
"You can't hide the wind"
It is a wonderful experience to come upon such an individual in adult life. I think that children naturally radiate their authentic heart filled with loving acceptance of life. then as we get older and more drawn "into" the world, we forget our true essence. When one is reminded by the whispering wind, speaking to us of our forgotten self, it is like a beautiful flower blossoms forth within our hearts, revealing to the world our true loving nature.
Your words are food for my soul today. Thanks for reminding me to be me.
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This is lovely writing. I loved the poignant feel of the wind and the images you conjured up with the words. Very well done with this one. I will now read more again. It was good to visit this page.
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Why do I feel this to be written to me,personally? Because that is how it speaks...to Me, to What Is from What Is. It IS the fresh breeze whispering through the Heart, rippling the lake to reflect Light in all directions, an insight only the truly blind cannot see. You touch this Heart deeply with the sweet sigh of Your Presence.
Namaste, brother. -
is this "you" on the photo ?
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Well Done Scribe! Again your presence brings a peace to me that can only be found in the words of Spirit. Whispers the wind of my dreams, tell the world..for it is so!
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Lovely images, Presence. I love the wind, light and sunshine kisses, this is fresh and inspiring.
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Standing Ovation!!!!
Dear Poet, Isn't it amazing what love does in one's life?
And isn't it wonderful when someone truly defines love, as you do here dear poet. Now all I wish is that I remember this lesson every single day of my life! Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! -
those are uplifting words coming from a silent space and resonating with truth.
thank you.
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Beautiful, succinct and subtle profundity
Namaste!
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so also with Love,'Your glimmering heart will tell on you.'-the pure fragrance of love will let all know -you cant hide it's purity it reacheas out inevitablly and touches all in it's presence
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Oh Dear, Prensence! I come to these pages hoping...and whenever you post I am always lifted into the reflection of kisses on the surface of the lake. This poem is like the fresh breeze you describe. Nothing is hidden, no matter how hard we try.
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Refreshingly clear!
Transparent as the wind, hmmm? A beautiful write, Presence. Eventually, everyone will SEE... and Know!
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