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Derserving

Another parking lot
     FUCK
  Going Nowhere But Home.
And even I know
I deserved
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Written June 18th, 2006

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  • bedazzled
    June 20, 2006
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    The fact you manage to convey so much in so little is admirable. Great piece


  • LemonDropAngel
    June 18, 2006
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    Its great I love it. Great to see you write some more... keep writing cause its always great
    xoxo


  • mysticlabyrinth
    June 18, 2006
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    this is wonderful! it says so much without saying much at all. that is hard to do! i love it. keep it up! love ya~