You are a light in many people’s lives
Yet you sit alone in darkness
You don’t deserve it but you condemn yourself to it
It’s a shame, it’s a shame
I know it’s not on purpose but you know I understand,
You just feel like being dark now
I know sometimes it’s necessary
But the sun has different ideas
Every part of you shines
Like a magic pixie dust
That you spread around so freely
Sprinkled it on us
You are scattered on souls
And you’ve hidden specks in our hearts
That glitter and gleam
And brighten the darkest mood
That any of us feel
You have showered me in this splendor
So much it is untrue
Im here right now and always
With a bit of my own shimmer
That I now spread to you.
Close your eyes and daydream
Of a time that you find precious
Ill do my best
My very best
To keep this vision living in you
Help you hold on to it when your grasp slips
Help you remember it when you get confused
Help you see it when you only see darkness
And
Help you live it with all the twinkle I see in your eyes
All the dazzle in your personality
And all the magic in your dust.
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Written June 18th, 2006
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awwww this is a really cute poem..and im guessing its for Rae, since he's thanking ya. anyway, this is nice of you darling. Hope everything is wel
sky xxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Excellent
I loved it, related to this aswell. Keep up the good work.
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AWESOME!
Wow, this one is really good! I like it!
You have showered me in this splendor
So much it is untrue
Im here right now and always
With a bit of my own shimmer
That I now spread to you.
That is probably my favorite part of the poem. But, it was hard to decide my favorite. To me, it seems very innocent (the poem). I think it is just how you worded things (probably the pixie dust lines, which is a very nice touch to it. It is a very creative metaphor). You've definantly got 5 stars out of 5 stars on this one. -
this is a wonderful poem smoke. your thoughtfulness and pure sweetness really come through here. you obviously are a devoted friend. i think my favorites of your work tend to be the ones written about someone. beautiful job ace.
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everything will be ok, ill make sure of it.
xxxxx smoke -
thankyou
xxx
Rae
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