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the ONE MORE SIP OF CROWN...poem

Good Evening Sweetie,
I guess I don't have to ask how your day was....a man and his machine....but it was very sweet for you to say you were thinking of me, with that (censored.) I have a poem....the...

ONE MORE SIP OF CROWN...poem

Hey ! I was wrong
there was one more Bud left,
the key word here is, was....

I was considering the Crown Royal
but I would end up
doing it
as a shooter
and that
would be a waste
maybe
just one
warm mouthful
I promise
I will sssssiiiiipppp it
....while I assault myself..........


Sipping done... assaulting...not quite yet
thinking about you....
Feeling you groan.....
my mouth full
of the sound,
full of you.
It has been
toooooo
looooong....oh God....
thinking of you
on my tongue
salty
sweet......
and you
with
those faded Wranglers.......
your boots still on.....
holding up your shirt tails,
looking down at me
as I pull them
past your heel....
Holding the back
of my head
so we move
in unison.

I can feel
you
in my hands
as I hold on......

yesssss.....
a warm sip of you;
a burning
like a liquor
into my gut.


Do you think Crown Royal will buy it ????? If they used it as an ad campaign who would buy it men or women????
Or should I have just said I miss you???
Something is amiss with this program tonight...I almost lost this poem during spell check....time to send and call it a night...let the assaulting begin!!!... "


 

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  • Mrs Mulholland
    December 17, 2007
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    What is "Crown Royal"? A brand of condoms?


  • Gerald Flagellation
    December 5, 2007

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    Is this something to do with golden showers? I hope so as I have always wanted to try this (receiving end of course).


  • MrsDobbins
    July 18, 2006
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    Hmm..Very interesting!

    Good luck in contest!
    Missy

  • Sunshinegf
    June 20, 2006
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    great work on this exrotic love poem

  • identifat
    June 19, 2006
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    as an add? I think women, most guys not too deep, just the whole drinks loosening effect, most do not see liquer except the hard stuff as sexual. love the imagery..


  • miss stephi
    June 19, 2006
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    I like this poem alot. It's hott. Hehe. Take care.
    Steph <3


  • Wati
    June 18, 2006
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    I like this poem, Well written and just flows nicely. Thank you for sharing

    =)
    Lac

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