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True Love Hurts

True love hurts, and I guess I'm just realizing this.
He broke my heart into several shattered pieces
And left me to pick it up and put it back together.
I thought our love was true
I thought everything was so perfect....
I was wrong.

True love hurts, as the title says
And maybe I'm just a hopeless romantic.
To think that someone loving me was ever possible
Thats a far dream to try to catch.

True love hurts, and I will keep saying it
Until it doesn't hurt any more.
True love stunk for me...
And now, he is gone and I'm left with the broken pieces.
True love is like a puzzle of the heart.
When it is over, the puzzle is broken.
Now its just putting them back together.

Author notes

this is dedicated to the man I thought I was going to spend the rest of my life with, but I was sorely mistaken.
Written June 18th, 2006

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  • Tonays-husband
    May 29, 2008
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    WOW!!

    That is an awesome poem sissy!!! I know how that feels...

  • hollisterx3wilson
    September 14, 2006
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    aww so sad but i kno how you feel. this is a nice well- written piece though.

  • AmethystPrincess
    June 24, 2006
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    Thanks. Yeah, it has been a super hard break up and I'm still suffering through it, and the hard part about it was that we were engaged, and then all of the sudden, he called off the engagement and our relationship, so its been a hard thing to go through. Thanks for the comment.
    ~Erin

  • egyptian-prince
    June 18, 2006
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    This poem is very deep and emotional, your heart has fallen to pieces and now you are showing us a little piece of these pieces.