Be, then, another's heartbreak:
Be another's reason for breathing, aching, needing!
Be the broken promise with an honest smile
That swears hope while, behind those masking teeth,
Makes ambitious plans to run away
From all that was good and holy
Simply by being in your presence
Lie, now, as you have so well
After uttering one false oath:
The river of deceit that crashes through the dam
Live happily in sadness:
Seethe in the hypocrisy you created,
Be the mud in which you wallow;
Devolve
Regress to that point
When you said something for once that was true,
Go
Go away
And lie no further.
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Written June 18th, 2006
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Harsh. Its hard to except the hard blown fact of the truth. but once realized...it all makes sense and its just easier to move on i guess.. -_-
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[sigh] brudda man
well...
for a bit of honesty...
i only realllly read this,
cuz you wrote it, ANNND it has my
favorite "C" word in it
HOWEVER! i must say...
quite PHENOM! pretty much...
i've been there too...
i am there now... and it sucks
♥ ♠ ♥
luffles and stuffles
The Other Gio™
(is it sad ppl still call
me that even tho it isn't my name?)
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I freaking love this one, and I love that word "cunt". How did you know that was one of my fav words?
This was an awesomely powerful write of regret and betrayal. Wow! Bravo!
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My Mum ish crazy! BUT..I'll have to agree with her. 100 Percent. You DO have a heart. I luffle you Daddy.
-Melly- -
ouch
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I felt this one. You have an amazing way of putting your emotions into words. Truly a master of your craft. Allow me to echo your sentiment, "ciao, cunt!" Well done.
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W rite ON!
DAYAM...!!!!
Felt the blazings of hell as I read this...
Despair and frustration enwrap me too at times, but this is where the elevator on the basement floor in in hell takes ya when yo go to the parking level..LoL..
to quote a style of a friend in AP ...Wrap me up in a burning carpet and twist me into a black hole..LoL
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Wow... I'm in awe right now. I hate when people want to get with someone just to hurt someone from their past. I've had it happen to me a lot. Hell, my sister decided to be a huge biotch to both me and her ex by dating someone he didn't like and happens to be my first... It's really ironic because... I've been feeling like saying this kind of thing to her and now I think I have the inspiration to do so.
Fanks Gio!
Awesome poem hun! *hugs*
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DAMN!! GI Joe
I need to do one of these 
hahaha, but ok now I, we , us women are cunts!! hmm. CUNTS!!!! hahaha I so would say here kitty kitty kitty, but then I might start to purr, and will have to um. proceed to wallow in my mud hahahahahaha
I absolutely loved what you did this is like therapy on paper!! lol
You made good sense really
I hope she swallows the mud, and chokes on it and spits up a loogie, and it be everything she ever did in her past really
*hack* *hack* and she sees what she has done to everyone she ever touched
You go Gi Joe you let it all out!!!
HELL YES!!!
110% behind you well, maybe trudging through some other CUNTS mud but eh!! I can do for a little mud my friend
love yaPj's
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Great write for the healing process...I too am having to endure once again...keep up the great work, and never give up on the dream that true love does exist...many blessings to you.
Terrie -
Great poem full of hurt, emotion and feeling! Great language used and imagary!
Lie, now, as you have so well
After uttering one false oath:
The river of deceit that crashes through the dam
Live happily in sadness: - [ Like the *clever poetic term* (forgotten it) for opposites used at the same time...]
See the in the hypocrisy you created,
Be the mud in which you wallow;
Devolve
Regress to that point
When you said something for once that was true,
Go
Go away
And lie no further.
This part - The last parts, were the best, flowed and read wondefully. -
Note to self..
Never let Gio take pictures.. Check.
I'm sorry though truly for whatever hurt has been inflected on your heart.. And yes you do have one damn it!
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