Daddy where are you?
I really have no clue...
I need you daddy,I really do
Mommy sometimes has no clue
You use to make the pain go away
Now you are the reason that is must stay
Daddy where are you?
I really have no clue.....
You promised me you would return
Your love is something that I yearn
I start to forget what you look like
Then mommy tells me we really look alike
I am worried daddy that I will forget
I am worried that one day I will forget we ever met
Daddy where are you?
I really have no clue....
Please come home daddy really soon
Before my memories of you float away like this balloon
Author notes
Written June 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- Happy fatherless day ! by maa.
333 points, ended June 21, 2006, 21 entries
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I am glad that everyone liked the way I wrote this poem.I got in touch with some really old emotions.Not to mention I thought of what my daughter went through.
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Very good poem. I hope he finds you again soon. Take care for yourself. Good luck in the contest. ttyl Tali
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Awesome!!! This was a great write...and dont worry...for if you truly love and miss someone...you'll never forget them...keep this up and thank you for your comments...ttyl.
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dearest darkeyes,
your poem is really beautiful in its sadness. I like the way you talk like you still were a little girl, as it is the little girl in you who is longing for her daddy. this is very touching, because your feelings are innocent and pure.
thank you so much for participating in the contest, and for sharing in this way your desire for your father's love.
much love to you,
marion
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