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Dirty razor's

Dirty razor's
Bloody wrist
Dark red stained carpet's
Voice's rushing threw your head
Telling you that it is over life is done
And now with this razor i end one's life
and began anothers.

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I am feeling very depreased, i'm just really tired right now ive been up for the past 2 day's i will try and rewrite a better version of this tommrow's till then u can leave me some comment's on what you think of it.
Written June 17th, 2006

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  • Lillian100
    August 6, 2006
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    mercie bouku, tua y ple tyu mareta regerh bildene esco reta.
    that's french for:
    Thank you very much for your lovely poem, you are such a hunk.

    cheers,
    Big Boobed Bimbo

  • Tylerc442
    July 11, 2006
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    Thank you


  • - Life On Standby -
    June 19, 2006
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    I like it...It's dark without having to be extremely detail like. I applaud it!