Sweeping Deeply into Love
Follow the frame
Of a touch of love from your hand
And chances to my life
Seem again with in reach
Dashing crashing
In to your arms
Take me into the madness
Of love
Shyly making your laughter
Ring in my ears
Sweeping deeply into love
A love just beginning
In you is burning gaze
I need your arms I stand with a ray of it
And all my pain.
I study my soul
And cant see
With out you
My infant wings upon the capacity
To carry me to you
How our infant ego just began
With our touches of love
You appear at the warmth of us learning to share these feeling of love
Dance before me
As my eyes and arms hold you
Quell my minds
Fear
And acquire the tears
That follows me
New pencils to be my friends
To write me things of new love
To touch your teachings
Things given unto me
I feel you watch
Me
I feel your smile
I feel your love
You come like white doves searching
Finding warmth
Ray of grand and ease
With playful fingers
Upon the frame
You rest upon me
And I realize that we know how to create
Our own dreams
Reflection in my hand
As you hold onto me
Spread our horizons
And I now
And all that separates us
Keeping us no choice but a calm, silent sea
Upon my life
And I rise and soul
As you hold my hand
Sweeping deeply into love
Steven Mels
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Written June 17th, 2006
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BEAUTIFUL WRITE!!!
This is a beautifully penned piece of free style romantic poem that conveys joy hope and peace that love brings to the persona.
I admire the use of descriptive imageries in this poem to paint a scenery of how the persona is sweeping deeply in love. -
Hi Steven, this is very nice written, full of good choosen pictures and with nice expressed feelings. Nice done:
~Sonja~ -
Oh! baby boy this is so beautiful. Your words make my heart sing with joy. I hope you have found true luv. Whats a mama to do when she finds her baby boy so happy. Thx for sharing....
Mama Linda
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love is so amazing especially in these times, this was very well done, thanks for sharing, and keep up the awesome poetry here.
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Beautifully, beautifully written, Steven!
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I hope this is the one and you don't have to search any longer.
To know that saomeone else has found love means that I too some day will find, that someone!!
~octavia
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Wow, Steve! Pops, this is truelly amazing! I can honostly say your poems are som much more refreshing then any that I've ever read. Your longing and desire for someone is so strong in everything you write and this is a wonderful example of it. I really love your words and the soul behind them.
Keep it up pops.
Much Love and God Bless
♥ Tawni
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Beautifully written!!!!! :F
Steven:
You have written a wonderful piece here, very clear, heartfelt and sincere.....
I have enjoyed this and pray this is a sign of newly found happiness, for you deserve this and more.....
God bless you my gorgeous and awesomest son.....
love you,
MoM
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Ah, yes. Good to see this. Makes me smile
to know you are happy again, my friend, and penning your love from the heart. Made my day a little brighter to know that you are feeling this way. 
God Bless and best wishes.
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very pretty and so lovingly posted thank you for sharing and good luck..Linda
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From your work I see the grasp, the influences your heart, makes you write. I see also the brilliance in the art. The words flowed gently from the sea, make me smile, you are right all the way to meet. Good job from a friend. ~Tweedle Da Dee
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