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Battered Moon Tune

Sing
Howl
The moon
she calls
raised voices
on the wind
harmonizing
synchronizing
Dance
move
the moon
she watches
swaying limbs
in the flame
spin
leap
to the battered
moon tune


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Written June 17th, 2006

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  • Faery of death
    June 17, 2006
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    amazing

    The form of the poem reminds me of "Out of the dust" that really good book we have to read in fishers class. so beautiful, I love your writing to no end.