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Waving the White Flag


Beneath skies and seas of misery
Within a world of endless sorrow
We wait for eternity
To come, and our life, swallow.

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  • ccfly
    June 17, 2006
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    Wow I like this. It made me think and it was very visual. Great job


  • raggyann
    June 17, 2006
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    wow this was a good and strong poem
    i realy liked the flow of this poem
    it was short and well wrote
    your words spillled from the page


  • June 17, 2006
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    I like this, it is short and the point is well taken. Nicely done! Tink