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To Die Alone

Everyone must die alone,
Cold and hungry for someone,
Wishing there had ever been someones arms,
Just to catch them,
And even as a child,
Knew the world would never be right,
That everything would shatter,
As soon as it was touched,
I was walking through dreams,
That things might be okay,
But there's no one to lean on,
Not today,
Ther never was,
In reality,
Just hollow hopes,
Rotting dreams,
That made the mind run and hide,
And maybe I want to die alone,
It's easier,
To feel no pain this way.

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Written June 17th, 2006

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  • chica1
    June 22, 2006
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    very nice!! keep up the good work!!
    ~jenny~


  • Blue-Raven
    June 17, 2006
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    This was really sad...It made me really sad...Dying alone would be the worse to me I think...Being alone at all is really hard. Very well written

    Angeline

  • OurxBeginning
    June 17, 2006
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    Aww this piece holds a lot of sorrow..and I can relate deeply to your words and it really is sad. I loved the ending..I don't think anyone would wanna die alone..with nobody by their side..to show them they care. Nicely written and keep it up.

    ~Midnight~