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Jens

Doubt had taken
My fragile mind
Confusion was
What I saw in the mirror

I hoped I felt
What I thought
That it was real
You convinced me it is

You give me this
Tickling feeling
I'd say it itches
But I don't really care

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Written June 17th, 2006

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  • -Lost Words-
    June 18, 2006
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    I know it's different...

    I consider it light, sweet and a little silly

  • Volst Conundrum
    June 18, 2006
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    dont know..it was diffrent from ur usual writes...ur writes wre usually deep...this felt like risig from the surface..a different feel...makes me ponder,..