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One Glance

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Tingling sensations with just a glance from hypnotic optics
A sea of warmth washes over; mind to mind, there is a feverish need
Euphoria rips into quivering flesh; white fire dances from a simple embrace

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Written June 17th, 2006

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  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    June 17, 2006
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    Wonderful picture to go along with your most expressive and imaginative write. Thank you for this entry and good luck in my contest... x LB

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    June 17, 2006
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    Thank you.

  • Sadien Sathantae
    June 17, 2006
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    Now that picture is kinky, and this poem fits it perfectly. Nice job Rose, and good luck in the contest. ^_^

    [Stigmatism]

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    June 17, 2006
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  • Blazing White Wolf
    June 17, 2006
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    nice sensual write sweetie discriptive with soft and loving yet erotic very well done love you rose
    Love,
    Dad

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    June 17, 2006
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    Thankies.

  • Yunaleska gold member
    June 17, 2006
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    wow. so beautiful. pretty work for something lustful and stuff..yeah. Good luck in the contest. I love how so much is in only three lines. Pretty pretty!
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