I walked to the place
You said you remembered
Above the sun- scorched hills.
I mumble the words
I remember you saying,
'Please, no tears.'
I mindlessly wander away,
Not knowing where I'm going
But too lost to care.
I watch the fainting sun,
As it disappears
And the moon begins to shine.
I long for the time
When you were here,
Standing firm beside me.
I know its existence is gone,
No tears will ever bring you back,
So why even cry?
I want to comprehend
Everything you said,
But can't.
STOP.
I wonder why you had to leave.
GO.
Just makes things worse.
I watched you walk into the sun
But i still felt your hand in mine
How?
I can't be strong anymore
Tears fall, piercing the song
And ruining the melody in my mind.
I need you here.
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Written June 17th, 2006
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this is really great. I absolutely love it. breaking up with someone is tough. those feelings don't go away for a long time. it's the worst. Great poem. -Kotai's cousin
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Love is so powerful it overwhelmes our whole being. Both with good memeories and sad. Waht a great emotional and heartfelt write. We never forget those we have loved, even when they are gone. Wonderfully done. Best wishes.
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this is a beautiful poem... I don't know what else to say except that I love it!!! well done!
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Excellent poem
Wow what a wonderful and emotional poem, I would love to hear these words in a song. So much love and sadness, I enjoyed reading your poem, I look forward to reading many more. Excellent job.
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