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Aardvark (an acrostic poem)

Afrikaans for "earth pig"
Anteater doesn't have teeth like the aardvark
Round tubular snout with a sticky tongue
Devours ants and termites
Very much nocturnal
Afer is its species name
Really has large upright ears
Keeper of first place in listing of animals in alphabetical order

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Written June 16th, 2006

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    April 11

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    Wow originally crafted!
    Nice imagery expressed
    and very vibrant.

    A treasure to read.

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • cricketjeff gold member
    March 8
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    Nice acrostic but probably a little "straight" for this contest

    Jeff


  • Shakari
    June 27, 2006
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    This was a fantastic and educational piece of poetry. I knew of what an aardvark was and of its spelling by age six, due to the PBS television show, "Arthur". I loved that show, but I am sidetracking. You have really used creativity to your benefit with this piece. I also like how you mentioned the word origin. Keep up the great work, good luck in the contest, and thanks for sharing!


  • DogFish silver member
    June 27, 2006
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    Tie guy ;at the end of my little adventure with the aardvarks I commend you again for touching all the bases of tubulidentata learning and lore with your entry .Glad to see somebody slip a little taxonomical nomenclature into their work!

  • DogFish silver member
    June 16, 2006
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    Very cute catalog of aardvark infomation and atributes.I'd like to see a dictionary writen up like that .Learning would be a lot more fun!Oh well, maybe in another lifetime.Thanks for your little nod to this contest.

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