I now look forward to tomorrow
Walking with a smile on my face
No more days filled with sorrow
I now look forward to tomorrow
Love, I no longer want to borrow
I am consumed by your grace
I now look forward to tomorrow
Walking with a smile on my face
Author notes
Written June 16th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- For Poets Who Have Won Trophys From Me (INVITE ONLY) by wings of an angel.
300 points, ended June 23, 2006, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Hiya stwanger
Love your bunny suit...had me giggling :)) And the size of your er um ears :O Have you had them enhanced ...surgerically???
Loved this triolet John, very romantic and heartfelt,
galfalfa *hug*
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Hurray for the triolet !!!
All the above comments and more. I have not written a triolet which I suppose is one up on a chevrolet, but I like the flow.
Very enjoyable.
Pure Thought -
This is nice. I really liked reading it. It reminds me more of how I feel now.
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wow this is a very enjoyable piece! simply wonderful!
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This is a very powerful poem to me. And it was such a hopeful poem too. brought a smile to my face.
Keep up the awesome poetry!!!
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wow....its seems such a simple poem but has so much power. I love it.
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This has just a strength of flow rather than form, sometimes you can see the form or even look for it in a contest, but here I did look for the form but my first and only read was one of wonder and adoration of the gift and the flow so brilliantly expressed in a skilled write, because of the gift being exercised and the experience breathing in this write I believe it sunk deep into my thinking and believing it is the used skill that makes a poem so well crafted and constructed. Well done!! A pleasure to read.
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Great work
John, This is a great poem. We can always walk a little taller and straighter when we are inspired by love. Thank you for an enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest and you have my applause. Keep smiling.
Newbie
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This is beautiful John as usual!
It reminds me of something I can't quite touch, but nevertheless, simply beautiful.
Alyssa
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very good! no one should have to borrow love...it should be given freely! *hugs*
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This is a very good Poem John, well done good luck in my contest
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